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Old April 8th, 2009, 04:29 PM
ArcadeImp
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Default Re: Check the new sticky...comment here!

A couple awkward sentences and mistakes, if you're interested in correcting them...

Egyptian
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Most of these hookahs will steel hookahs
Chinese
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They are much lighter and feel much cheaper to hold
Perhaps: ...and feel cheaper in the hand

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The good thing about these hookahs is that they tend to me significantly cheaper and available in many different styles
Bambino / QT
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which to some are considered something to replace quickly
... They are sold with Mya hoses which people often replace with a more desirable hose.

MZ
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They do however, tend to be more inexpensive
...They do however, tend to be less expensive.

KM
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they come with a great and usually attractive hose
...they come with an attractive hose with a good draw that many people prefer.

Sahara
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hey tend to cost almost if not as much as their rivals
Hoses
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Other hoses are not washable and will rust
...Other hoses are not washable and will rust when washed

Rotation
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There are multiple hose rotators which are even more less desired, the more hoses, the less of an effect for rotation, and the worse of a smoking experience
This section is a little awkward to read.
...Some hookahs are available with rotators which allow the hookah to swivel when passing the hose. It is not a popular feature as there is rarely a problem when passing the hose. In addition there are separate rotators available, however they are for the most part, unnecessary.

Common chamber
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These hookahs, however, tend to be more inexpensive than others
...These hookahs, however, tend to be less expensive

Awesome post. Very well put together.
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