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Old August 8th, 2009, 12:55 PM
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Default Re: What you guys think of this?

well this would be my critique: I think you could take the "prices" out of "hoses for cheap prices". I would reformat the Secrets part into (including not having the S behind the hookah, looks weird to my eye)

and Tips!

I love the overall design, minimal but not to the point of boring. I think the font could be changed into something a lil more fancy but not overly so. Great color scheme, the smoke on the sides of the page could be a lil more pronounced (darker, but just a bit) and maybe a lil smoke near the top part would look good great job!
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