Where do we start?
If you don't want to buy exoticas (8 dollars for a box of 100 COALS!) then keep smoking those disgusting quicklights... eww.
Pack the bowl as you were doing with the tight foil wrap... But as for shisha you don't have enough shisha... You need to pinch it on there so it is a centimeter below the foil... Not quite touching & packed down a TAD. You gotta have airflow
Your problem is your holes are too big
Use a toothpick or a needle
Your holes should be as thin as this: