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Old June 10th, 2010, 08:56 PM
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Default Re: My first video review

Originally Posted by dabboy View Post
maybe the nht thing was mentioning that the stuff previously around the stem looked like egg beaters on acid.

not a bad first review.

Pros:[LIST][*]very blunt / honest[*]explaining you're reasons for buying the hookah[*]I found your sarcasm funny (although others might not)[/LIST]Cons:[LIST][*] Beginning was way too long, should be no longer then 3-4 sec[*]sometimes sarcasm can be confusing[*]the link needs to be click-able because I was not about to retype it all[/LIST]
good start, keep em coming!
I appreciate the criticism, I couldn't find a way to make the link clickable, the research I did on it said youtube only allowed non-profits to put clickable links in videos, I admit I didn't do an insane amount of research though.
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