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Old August 8th, 2009, 12:46 PM
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Default What you guys think of this?

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submitted for the HP e-mag thing

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Old August 8th, 2009, 12:54 PM
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I like it but it seems a little plain to me too usually I look for something thats really eye catching.
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Old August 8th, 2009, 12:55 PM
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well this would be my critique: I think you could take the "prices" out of "hoses for cheap prices". I would reformat the Secrets part into (including not having the S behind the hookah, looks weird to my eye)

Secrets,
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I love the overall design, minimal but not to the point of boring. I think the font could be changed into something a lil more fancy but not overly so. Great color scheme, the smoke on the sides of the page could be a lil more pronounced (darker, but just a bit) and maybe a lil smoke near the top part would look good great job!
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Ty for the C&C - Editing now.
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part of the stem on the right side got cut out. magic wand FTL!
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k updated
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Old August 8th, 2009, 01:38 PM
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any new pics tje first one looked alright
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yeah this is just a sample anyways, but i seem to like it for a first.
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ya i would look at using a contrasting color for some of the banner and smoke and all, maybe a green/blue hue or even maybe HP orange. just need some difference to make the hookah pop out more

other than that i think its fine
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Old August 8th, 2009, 07:06 PM
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im liking the changes you made! the second one is my fav, looks a ton better!

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Old August 8th, 2009, 07:12 PM
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Coming from a former graphic designer you need more colour and at least 2 different fonts to contrast each other. Your spacial relation isn't bad.
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i dont get hoses for cheap? :S
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I like it but it seems a little plain to me too usually I look for something thats really eye catching.
i agree^
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K updated, now what?
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Awesome Syko! I like it...very neat little idea here
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Thanks mayneee. maybe one day i can hook u up w/ a proper SIGNATURE!
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Old August 8th, 2009, 11:24 PM
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Looks awesome Syk! great way to get the idea rolling!
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damn i love CC, i like it a lot more myself!
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Default Re: What you guys think of this?

I like the color on the first one a bit more than the second. I think you made it too transparent. You could fade the hookah it's self by maybe 5%. Other than that You did a really good job! I am so proud. *sniffles*
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thanks GF, took a half hour
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